Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 421,198 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Said No - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I said no
She said yes
No meeting ground
Differences were found

Life at peril
Boat incapable to sail
No travelers on board
As if carrying no load

It won't move
Until misgivings removed
Differences resolved
Problem is solved

Life must be normal
At no point to be abnormal
It is joint venture
There hangs the future

So keep it united
Never remain disunited
Hands to form strength union
Prove best as true companion


Comments about I Said No by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2012 12:01:00 AM)


    Great poem


    Jon OtanoLess than a minute ago
    You've done grea
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 11:55:00 PM)


    I said no
    She said yes
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 27, 2012


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