I See How You Are Reading, Poem by Liza Sud

I See How You Are Reading,

I see how you are reading,
are playing with me and lead.
And I in you disappear
like rain in the soil so bleak.

I see how you believe me,
because I am loving you,
you are woman-the revealing,
I say everything to you!

You are Universal woman,
as a falsh of my own star,
and from the infernal burden
you are rising me too high.

The monument resurrected,
you are future, but you're here.
because you are in the present -
there is no more past grief.

What for do they write so oddly
as if they saw no signs?
Their men's courage is so doleful,
as if unrequited love.

And from you there is no answer,
but there's inspiration moan,
the white Light sweeter than summer,
which is in love with the world!

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Я вижу, как ты читаешь,
заигрываешь, ведёшь,
и я в тебе исчезаю,
как в почве холодной дождь.

Я вижу, как ты мне веришь,
и потому - люблю.
Ты - женщина-откровенье,
я всё тебе говорю!

Ты - женщина-мирозданье,
как вспышка моей звезды.
из тяжести инфернальной
меня поднимаешь ты.

Воскресшее изваянье,
ты - будущее, и здесь!
И прошлого нет страданья,
ведь ты в настоящем есть!

Зачем они пишут странно,
как будто видений нет.
Их мужество так печально,
и ждет на любовь ответ.

Но нет от тебя ответа,
зато - вдохновенья стон,
и белый Свет слаще лета,
который в весь мир влюблен.

Thursday, January 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 27 January 2017

THE WHITE LIGHT SWEETER THAN SUMMER, , , IS IN LOVE WITH THE WORLD. What a gorgeous image! There is a rapport between two women which is just about perfect in the way they complement each other and their interactions is productive. Men don't understand and seem to only complicate what the women have resolved. I'm not at all certain that is a correct view. B-U-T this poem put me in an exalted state of mind: the bonding between the speaker and the person she addresses is so beautifully expressed, it shows how wonderful human emotions can be when they are informed by a higher purpose, a transcendent commitment, the whole world shares in their loving regard. Their love spills over and spreads among people around them, making all things better.

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Daniel Brick 26 January 2017

THE WHITE LIGHT SWEETER THAN SUMMER, , , IS IN LOVE WITH THE WORLD. What a gorgeous image! There is a rapport between two women which is just about perfect in the way they complement each other and their interactions is productive. Men don't understand and seem to only complicate what the women have resolved. I'm not at all certain that is a correct view.

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