Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

I Shall Not Give Up - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Never go for perfection
But watch own action
That shall lead to near goal
Then wait for beautiful call

Do not search for impossible
As everybody faces struggle
How best you try to attain?
And that shall always remain

See in him a best effort
That shall anchor ship at port
We call it perfect attempt
With action so prompt

I shall take chance
At once
To be in line with perfection
For whatever is needed for action

I shall not give up
And fall to trap
As it shall cause my downfall
But I shall dash to break the wall

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/16/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    well determined
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/16/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    ?? ???'s [3
    xIf you want to reach the moon than aim for the sun, if you want to be perfect than aim for the one.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/16/2014 8:16:00 AM)

    Mixed thoughts? Elliott Morreau5 hours ago Contradictory's in line 5 and 15? Mixed emotions or thoughts? Maybe expand or reorder? Ie: abrupt ending, break the wall What is the wall? What does it represent? Is it the wall keeping you from success? Or is it the wall keeping you from failure? Since once you break the wall it will cause your downfall? The ending is little confusing. But other then that i liked it :) Comment 1 Comment+1
    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago that is left to the wisdom of readers.. enjoy poem
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2014 11:56:00 PM)

    Never go for perfection
    But watch own action
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014

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