Sunday, April 12, 2015

I Should Like To Write A Poem Comments

Rating: 4.5

I should like to write a poem,
before I am called to embrace that eternal dark.
That I might on this unresponsive world,
At least leave in place my distinctive mark.
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Walter Jackson
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Chinedu Dike 12 April 2015

A good piece of poetry, well articulated, nice encapsulated and penned with conviction. Your train of thoughts is not bad. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Kelly Kurt 12 April 2015

A deep, heartfelt poem in a few words of human perspective. Thanks for sharing, Walter

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Paul Brookes 12 April 2015

I liked this and in no way is it inferior. The old adage write about what you know and you'll not go far wrong. Anyway who said it was a competition your poems just fine. Of course this might just be a rhetorical question or poem even. However I still liked it BB: O)

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