I Submit Poem by Adens Kamwi

I Submit

Rating: 5.0


i submit to your body
i admit to this slavery
tender touch and blissful kiss
breaking free of freedoms mist
for love is to submit
and to you i do submit
take my hands and place a chain
for your love is my life's flame
do you say that you agree
or do you prefer to set me free?

Saturday, October 17, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: slavery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bryan Alexander 18 October 2009

i love the imagery. We all submit to something, and the twist at the end was cool........10

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Obinna Eruchie 18 October 2009

'i submit to your body / i admit to this slavery / tender touch and blissful kiss / breaking free of freedoms mist / for love is to submit...' sweet words of love that show the power of love to warm the bearer into submission.

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Hafeni Nghidinua 04 July 2017

Short, sweet and deep. This poem is awesome.

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Chitra - 22 October 2009

a nice one with an interesting twist! 10+

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

Nice meditative poem about love, thank you for sharing...10+++

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Anthony Zeigler 19 October 2009

Nice i Love it.10! i like how the rhythm is exposed

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2009

nice narration. good to read.10++++

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Katima Mulilo, Namibia
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