I Submit Poem by Adens Kamwi

I Submit

Rating: 5.0


i submit to your body
i admit to this slavery
tender touch and blissful kiss
breaking free of freedoms mist
for love is to submit
and to you i do submit
take my hands and place a chain
for your love is my life's flame
do you say that you agree
or do you prefer to set me free?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 18 October 2009

'i submit to your body / i admit to this slavery / tender touch and blissful kiss / breaking free of freedoms mist / for love is to submit...' sweet words of love that show the power of love to warm the bearer into submission.

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Bryan Alexander 18 October 2009

i love the imagery. We all submit to something, and the twist at the end was cool........10

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Hafeni Nghidinua 04 July 2017

Short, sweet and deep. This poem is awesome.

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Chitra - 22 October 2009

a nice one with an interesting twist! 10+

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Marieta Maglas 20 October 2009

Nice meditative poem about love, thank you for sharing...10+++

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Anthony Zeigler 19 October 2009

Nice i Love it.10! i like how the rhythm is exposed

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2009

nice narration. good to read.10++++

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Adens Kamwi

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Katima Mulilo, Namibia
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