i submit to your body
i admit to this slavery
tender touch and blissful kiss
breaking free of freedoms mist
for love is to submit
and to you i do submit
take my hands and place a chain
for your love is my life's flame
do you say that you agree
or do you prefer to set me free?
i love the imagery. We all submit to something, and the twist at the end was cool........10
Nice meditative poem about love, thank you for sharing...10+++
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'i submit to your body / i admit to this slavery / tender touch and blissful kiss / breaking free of freedoms mist / for love is to submit...' sweet words of love that show the power of love to warm the bearer into submission.