you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks
the precious candle that never dies
a piece of heaven is what you are
a darling soul from afar
who rests without you in mind?
who dreams without you is blind
you are my last breath
my joy
my only mistress
if life grants me peace
if it grants me happiness
if it grants me riches
if it grants me love
then you are that grant
and for that Life i thank
nice extended metaphor you are the last twinkle in the sky before the dawn breaks the precious candle that never dies nice lyric poem 10
ah nice poem please so creative also well penned ideas well done there luwi
A lovely poem Adens with heartfelt verses...
written with a silver pen....keep em' comin...we need more who speak from the soul.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
o wow, this one has so much honest depth and beauty. It is very convincing! I truly thought it was BEAUTIFUL!