Vipin Trisal

Rookie - 10 Points (3rd July 1984 / Kashmir-Paradise On Earth)

I Surrender - Poem by Vipin Trisal

No one can conquer me with power, anger and terror
As my heart is my castle and it is mine forever

I lost it in your eyes but I don't wonder
As the world around me smelled lavender

My castle fell for you with a huge thunder
Not talking to you was a great blunder

Had I said a word I believe down under
My life would have glowed like a chandler

In all my dreams I see you render
All I know is that, 'Yes...I surrender'

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, June 23, 2008

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