Vipin Trisal

Rookie - 10 Points (3rd July 1984 / Kashmir-Paradise On Earth)

My Castle - Poem by Vipin Trisal

No one can conquer me with power, anger and terror,
As my heart is my castle and it is mine forever.


Comments about My Castle by Vipin Trisal

  • (11/14/2007 12:24:00 AM)

    The heart may not be conquered by power, anger or terror, but it can be conquered by LOVE! The only difference is that, in the first three, you are forced. Whereas, with love, you willingly have yourself conquered. And what a beautiful surrender it will be! You're a very promising poet. Write more. (Report)Reply

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  • Malini Kadir (10/13/2007 4:50:00 AM)

    Don't be too sure...
    Pride goes before a fall
    That is all i say!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 16, 2011


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