I want to believe one thing
that if you look
past the flicker of flames
venture beyond
the warmth of a glow
into the embers of my soul
you feel as I feel
an impalpable fervor
as if nothing else exists
only the need to
surrender
as if to give up in despair
for there is no other love
none beyond yours
such dulcet surrender
I surrender my lifetime
To you
awesome..! ! ! everythin that iz written iz sooooooo right.. it's a fact.. lol
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The giving of one's whole self unto another.. such devotion 'a lifetime' of love.. is forever and one day.. A beautifully romantic piece here Pablo.. Well done! Wendy