I Thee Wed Poem by Magdalena Biela

I Thee Wed

Rating: 5.0


She wasn't taller than her doll-house.
She was still writing to Santa Claus.
Dark curly hair and wide open eyes
she piously kneeled piercing the skies.
She smiled to Heaven and silently said:
'With this heart I Thee wed! '.

She blossomed slowly as a dark Rose,
her wild thorns brought bleeding to her many foes.
Her pale fingers played with rosaries and ink.
She kept watching the heaven without a blink.
She smiled to the blue Moon and silently said:
'With these eyes I Thee wed! '.

Only once she met the dark Evening Star.
Her heart echoed its shine near and far.
She opened her bud, her thorns she killed,
with divine love the dark Rose was filled.
She smiled to Him and silently said:
'With this life and love I Thee wed! '.

I Thee Wed
Tuesday, April 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 21 July 2018

Beautiful poem, Maddalena! Congrats on having it finally chosen as member poem of the day!

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Kim Barney 29 March 2020

Maddalena, my friend! I haven't talked with you for a while! I have commented on this poem before, but I had to come back and read it again. I am going to mention it in my Puzzle Master Quiz 050, to be posted the day after tomorrow.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 July 2018

wow so sweet so sweet- She smiled to Him and silently said: 'With this life and love I Thee wed! '. yes excellent - I Thee wed

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

With this heart I thank you deeply...

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Practicing Poetess 21 July 2018

An amazing poem! I like this very much. Congrats on Poem of the Day! :)

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

Thank you for being so kind to my poem and to me...

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Sylva 21 July 2018

She blossomed slowly as a dark Rose. Nicely written and well communicated.

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

All my heart blossoms in joy...thank you!

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It's a good thing I had a box of tissues nearby.Your poem is beautiful and heartfelt..I still have tears in my eyes because your poem is very touching..Faith in Love! A ten..

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Magdalena Biela 22 July 2018

Dear Lord, I was surprised to aknowledge that my poem was chosen poem of the day for reasons unknown to me, but to bring tears to someone's eyes makes me cry...Blessed you be...

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