*i Think I Might Be Dieing Poem by Shelby Renee

*i Think I Might Be Dieing

Rating: 2.9


I think I might be dieing
My health is disappearing
I think my time is coming
Symptoms keep stopping and reappearing
I think I might be dieing
Because something just isn't right
Something is breaking down my body
I feel like I'm losing a fight
I think I might be dieing
My chest hurts whenever I breathe
At times I can't breathe at all
What is wrong with me?
I think I might be dieing
My head is constantly hurting
There are times when I get dizzy
These things just keep occuring
I think I might be dieing
I feel so limp and lifeless
I have my good days also
But I'm still scared despite this
I think I might be dieing
And if this proves to be true
To everyone I care about
Remember that I love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 26 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Shelby. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Rick Adriolo 23 November 2013

It's sad when I see this is the last poem you submitted.. Wrote in 2009.. and I'm reading it now end 2013.. It makes me wonder.. Was this your last poetic breath or a scream for help.. Hopefully you just stopt writing.. take care..

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