Wednesday, February 4, 2015

I Think-I Succeed Comments

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This is the world where I dream,
What I am? like you a stream,
Flowing following listing the song,
What harm in this, I feel no wrong,
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Susan Williams 16 December 2020

This is a dreamland, You are my dream and I'm yours, =======beautiful lines

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 05 February 2015

Life is just like a stream in this world where we all live, think and dream to get success in life. Really a touching and beautiful poem composed and shared on. Nicely drafted.

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