as the rain patters
the glass shatters
i think of you
cracks cover walls
and i start to fall
i still think of you
the sky burns
the world doesn't turn
i think of you
my arm is in pain
a scream i can't make
i still think of you
had enough, want more
brains cover the floor
but i'm still thinking of you
Ashes is this a cutting? If so its pretty abstract...artistic in Poetics...
That was really deep and really emotional. It flowed really well too. I like it. Nice write!
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A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and penned with intensity. It's very nice, you captured the love in the inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.