I Tried Poem by Hannah Williams

I Tried



staying up all night, wanting what i cant have
down deep in a place were im not welcomed
so now theres no point to this.... but i tried
pain i had.., worth nothing
a loss i could not afford
tears shed for no purpose
and now theres nothing to fight for.
but you cant say i didnt try......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zachary Clark 19 March 2009

You tears spread cold tremmers of sweat to the unknown forgotten within the world lets hope you don't fell victim.

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Brandon w 05 March 2009

i like this.short but its says a lot.

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Hannah Williams

soulest place of nothing
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