I Tried Poem by Hannah Williams

I Tried



staying up all night, wanting what i cant have
down deep in a place were im not welcomed
so now theres no point to this.... but i tried
pain i had.., worth nothing
a loss i could not afford
tears shed for no purpose
and now theres nothing to fight for.
but you cant say i didnt try......

Thursday, March 5, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zachary Clark 19 March 2009

You tears spread cold tremmers of sweat to the unknown forgotten within the world lets hope you don't fell victim.

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Brandon w 05 March 2009

i like this.short but its says a lot.

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