I'Ve Given Up Poem by Logan Rheinst

I'Ve Given Up

Rating: 5.0


life’s too hard
and I’m too weak
I find no reason
yet still i speak

what is my sin?
why do i ache?
my spirit trembles
and my body shakes

drained of hope,
i lay me down.
at the mercy of god
reassurance not found

awaiting my hell
i sit and i fade.
sulfuric smell
invading my space.

this is my fate
written before time.
to be devoured by self,
and have nothing divine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 23 April 2006

logan, i thnk you need to tackle more subjects, more issues rather than your pain all the time. a poet needs to be sensitive about everything. be resourceful. hit readers like a flood.

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***** ********* 13 February 2006

You are far to talented and young to die just yet Logan. great poem. 10 from nurturing, well sometimes! ! ! Tai

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