I'Ve Given Up Poem by Logan Rheinst

I'Ve Given Up

Rating: 5.0


life’s too hard
and I’m too weak
I find no reason
yet still i speak

what is my sin?
why do i ache?
my spirit trembles
and my body shakes

drained of hope,
i lay me down.
at the mercy of god
reassurance not found

awaiting my hell
i sit and i fade.
sulfuric smell
invading my space.

this is my fate
written before time.
to be devoured by self,
and have nothing divine.

Friday, February 3, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: reassurance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 23 April 2006

logan, i thnk you need to tackle more subjects, more issues rather than your pain all the time. a poet needs to be sensitive about everything. be resourceful. hit readers like a flood.

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***** ********* 13 February 2006

You are far to talented and young to die just yet Logan. great poem. 10 from nurturing, well sometimes! ! ! Tai

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