Saturday, February 17, 2007

I Want To Climb Those Long Legs Comments

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If you never dive beneath the waters surface
You will never know what it was
That pulled you under
Take that deep breath and fill your lungs
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Ted Sheridan
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Ronald Stroman 17 February 2007

lol. i want to climb the loooong legs of Ms. Aruba. i want to send my mind there, but knowing my 'jealous' body, ' it would want to go too. oh yeah, this too... dive down and taste her spring waters, and not drown. i might want some more tomorrow. the 'anticipation' of Ms. Aruba got me SPRUNG.

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Dee Daffodil 17 February 2007

This is a terrific poem Ted....very strong, and powerful...excellent message about seizing all that life has to offer, and knowing no bounds! ! Hugs, Dee

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Mr. Sheridan, we must have been on the same wavelength this morning. I wrote a similar piece only just a few moments ago. Wow.

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Linda Ori 17 February 2007

Great advice, Ted. 'Dare to explore' says it all. Wonderful perspective and deep insight here. Linda

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