Andrew BensleyPage

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I Want To Scream - Poem by Andrew BensleyPage

Anger,
again i want to scream,
but for different reasons.
i cant even explain how i feel...

i just wanna rip my face off, freak some people out...

but i cant get out how i feel, cause then i get screamed at and told i'm an ignorant adolescent that doesn't understand the way 'things' work.

i feel a red scene in my mind, not so much red, more like a reddish-orangish feeling, like that which makes me want to curl in a ball and fade away, but only because my inability to be able to scream.

Their watching me like an eagle soars over its prey, eyes locked onto its food.

i cant even budge a movement,
for if i even attempt to budge i'm seen and stalked forever..

i want,


to scream...


Comments about I Want To Scream by Andrew BensleyPage

  • Adeline FosterAdeline Foster (10/13/2015 5:35:00 PM)

    Hope you got your wish and hope it did you some good. Read mine - Who Am I -
    Adeline
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  • Adam ReedAdam Reed (3/13/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    it seemed to me like you had a lot going through your mind that you tried to get out all at once when u wrote this. take it one concept at a time and you'll go far :) (Report)Reply

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  • Carrie Salazar (3/13/2010 3:17:00 PM)

    i really like this one. i especally like the detail.: D (Report)Reply

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  • ~Heart of Ice~ ¢♦ ¢♦ ¢ (3/13/2010 3:10:00 PM)

    i like the way you explained this. it's wonderful in it's own twisted way. haha. people like us make a spiral staricase look straight. i luv it. (Report)Reply

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  • Kassiah Gervaise (3/12/2010 8:41:00 PM)

    brilliant, i understand this poem i see eye to eye with it's words, wonderful. (Report)Reply

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  • Cat TigerCat Tiger (3/12/2010 11:25:00 AM)

    You seem frightened by the thought of God watching you all the time. So much so that in your first poem you call His most beautiful and mysterious creature, woman, satan. God created Man and Woman, heaven and hell for our benefit. Christ descended into hell and rose again. This was to show us we could do the same. Don't be afraid. Especially not of woman. Most simply want you to be happy. Your poetry needs structure. Study English grammar and apply it correctly to your writings. (Report)Reply

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  • Andrew Herrera (3/11/2010 4:12:00 PM)

    I didn't like this one too much. There were way too many cliches for me.3/10 (Report)Reply

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  • Crusnik Vampy -Samantha Micnheimer (3/11/2010 2:33:00 PM)

    Think of the hard times as satan tempting you. and in fact that is what is happening... ik its hard to think like that sometimes especially when you want to scream. just think of the future and when you live on your own ik its a long way away but its has helped me through. (Report)Reply

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  • red rose of texas (3/11/2010 12:28:00 PM)

    haha i know what you mean lol i feel the same way

    love is always
    red rose of texas
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  • Aimee Lee (3/9/2010 9:25:00 PM)

    gahh, dont we all...>_< (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 6, 2010



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