Ravi Sathasivam

I Want You To Be Mine...... - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

When the sun shines in my life
then I want you to be my light
When the moon bring romantic nights
then I want you to be my Juliet
When the wind blow his whistle
then I want you to be my dancer
When the ocean calm and pleasant
then I want you to be my love boat
When the rain shower with lightening and thunder
then I want you to be in my arms that surrounded
When the heart thrust for love and pleasure
then I want you to be in my soul
When the dreams brings reality in life
then I want you to be my lady for ever

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  • (3/29/2005 7:25:00 AM)

    Admirable sentiments, but some syntax problems, and the term 'love boat' will have unintended symbolism for Americans as it is the name of a sub-sentient television program. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 29, 2005

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 1, 2010

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