poet Paul Storm

Paul Storm

I Was

i was

going
to write
you a
poem

about
us

instead
i'll just
sneak
into your room

blend into
your shape

and stroke
your hair

Poem Submitted: Monday, March 3, 2008

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  • Sadiqullah KhanSadiqullah Khan (4/29/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    lovely............, , , , , , , , , , , ,

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  • K. V. VenkataramanaK. V. Venkataramana (4/8/2008 6:17:00 AM)

    A lovely poem, Nomi. Your poem has a sudden twist.

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  • Tired of Being Exploited (4/3/2008 2:19:00 PM)

    lo and behold! you did write one. Tricky little devil...

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  • Bill Smith (3/3/2008 6:22:00 PM)

    blend into your shape, i like that, great poem enjoyed the read
    smiffy

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  • Feb Bee (3/3/2008 8:30:00 AM)

    it is kind of cool. i like it.

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