I Was Poem by Paul Storm

I Was

Rating: 4.5


i was

going
to write
you a
poem

about
us

instead

i'll just
sneak
into your room

blend into
your shape

and stroke
your hair

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 29 April 2008

lovely............, , , , , , , , , , , ,

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K. V. Venkataramana 08 April 2008

A lovely poem, Nomi. Your poem has a sudden twist.

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Tired of Being Exploited 03 April 2008

lo and behold! you did write one. Tricky little devil...

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Bill Smith 03 March 2008

blend into your shape, i like that, great poem enjoyed the read smiffy

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Feb Bee 03 March 2008

it is kind of cool. i like it.

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