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Rating: 4.9





5-7-5s:
tiny running ant
what perfect purpose you have
eluding myself

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Marvin Brato 15 February 2008

Splendid work... it depict day to day interaction of man with the environment! Lots of lessons learned from these kinds of poetry. Great job Nomi! A 10.

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Sarah Moore 01 February 2008

beautiful, i love short poems

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Kyle Shield Laster 08 July 2008

your haikus are great. i've only written one. 'Blooming Gloom'. its okay. keep writing! !

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anurag duggal 15 June 2008

nice poem great rythm and feelins......

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Edward Wright Haile 05 April 2008

Not sure why you say WIP. Estuary is spelled wrong. Why should th number 17 mean anything in English, especially at the sacrifice of sense, leaving out 'at' bef 3 a. m. But these are very satisfying and some are very good. When my syllables burst the box and become poems I just call em 'high coos'.

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Aashish Ameya 21 March 2008

good collection of Haikus..i like all

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Riquetta Elliott 21 February 2008

This a very excellent poem you wrote. It shows what a man see in the environment.

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