I use to see in black and white
With a desire of not existing
But you came with a shiny light
And brought the color that was missing
I never thought I’d find the way
Out of the maze of life
You took me to the Milky Way
And I took out of my heart a knife
With you I seemed to reach the stars
That shone from high above- at us
But it began to rain
And through the wall of it I saw
Your angel face was fading away
It was the last thing I ever saw.
And I began to see in black and white
And entered once again my maze
With heavy rain pouring down my face
I understood
I was in love.
This is a beautiful written poem.....it's soooo sad.....I really enjoyed reading this. -Evelyn-
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem began quite well. As it continued, it began to fade a bit. At the end, I felt it lacked a little too much. Its not a bad poem but its not a great one either. It warrants about a 7.