Thursday, April 26, 2007

I Was In Love Comments

Rating: 4.3

I use to see in black and white
With a desire of not existing
But you came with a shiny light
And brought the color that was missing
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snejana novosedlova
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Greenwolfe 1962 27 May 2008

This poem began quite well. As it continued, it began to fade a bit. At the end, I felt it lacked a little too much. Its not a bad poem but its not a great one either. It warrants about a 7.

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Miss Starrbox 26 April 2007

This is a beautiful written poem.....it's soooo sad.....I really enjoyed reading this. -Evelyn-

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