Iulia Lex

I Went Ahead - Poem by Iulia Lex

I went ahead and said that no,
I'm not alone in this..
But yes, I'm rightfully confused.

I went ahead and did
What was impossible to build
In my own head -
I went ahead and met
My future and my own demise:

To travel to a place unknown
Inside your mind, a star unborn
To meet its end, its own collapse
Imploding, slowly, in your eyes.

So in the end I went ahead
And fled the yesterday we held
For just a wild, fleeting glimpse
In our own clutching hand - in hand.

Topic(s) of this poem: confusion

Comments about I Went Ahead by Iulia Lex

  • Sofia Kioroglou (10/31/2015 11:53:00 AM)

    Brilliant dear! I loved every line and word. Good to have you on poemhunter.com. Wish you all the best and keep entertaining us with your work! P.S If you would like to join my poetry blog on sofiakioroglou.wordpress.com be welcome! Take care and God bless you (Report) Reply

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  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/30/2015 3:38:00 PM)

    Welcome at P.H., Iulia! your first poem is a well penned one.. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing
    Ciao dall'Italia
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  • Kelly Kurt (10/30/2015 2:25:00 PM)

    Very nicely written, Lulia. Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, October 31, 2015

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