I Will Love You Poem by khanyisile cele

I Will Love You

Rating: 4.2


For eternity I will love you
till the moon swallows the sun
and all is left is darkness
I will still love you.
with tears or a smile in your face.
the love I have for you no men can change
cause before God created the earth,
the trees, the mountains, the oceans, the animals
and men he already had you and me in mind
and together we are his perfect creation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lungelo Mbatha 19 April 2008

Finally! I've been waiting to see one of your pieces! This is passionate powerful and sweet- a nice write- I look 4ward to seeing more! ...CheerZ!

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beauty in the writing, lovely poem thanks

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Nina .a. 17 June 2008

I liked it, really nice w/ a beautiful msg. Nina ♥

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blue 802 09 July 2008

He had you in mind, nice piece

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Greenwolfe 1962 09 July 2008

This is more than a nice piece. I gave it a 9. GW62

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 27 November 2017

Nice poem Khanyie, , , till the moon swallows the sun.. Like that line

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Bathoko Hadebe 03 January 2010

Verry good my sistar neh

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Gabi Ngubeni 14 May 2009

the guy has no clue how lucky he is to be a recipient of such pure love. Great write girl!

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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

powerful poem... go girl tell him. thanks for sharing.md

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Kefentse Sathekge 05 September 2008

heart warming poem. does he know you love him so much? if not, call him now :)

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