I Wish I Had Said Poem by Darkness Falls

I Wish I Had Said

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I wish I had said…
Nothing at all
Everything that came out
Of my mouth was wrong
The words didn’t help much

I wish I had said…
That I love you
Everything that I said
Was not what I meant
All I want is for you to
Forgive me

I wish I had said…
Nothing to make everything
Go right
The only thing I should have
Said was what I really felt

I wish I had said…
That I love you with all my
Heart
And that I am sorry for
Everything that went wrong
Between us…

~*Tosha*~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shiza Khan 23 September 2008

ohh it's a nice poem wid true feelings penned down here.. yeh sometimes we just fail ourselves because we don't speak our heart out.

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Qendresa Ulaj 23 September 2008

i like this one...and we always say the wrong things at the same time: ( good job.... :)

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Adeline Foster 28 June 2011

What a poignant poem, and yes, we all do it. Try mine – If Only—and then you may laugh. Adeline

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That was very touching. It sounds a little like my poem What I Wish I Told Her. Nice write!

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Laurie Hill 29 January 2009

Something we all have done.....a nice write

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Linda Winchell 29 January 2009

There have been many times in my life that I, 'Wish I had said's ' Just never came out. You are young and are instore for many more I'm afraid. God Bless, Linda Ten!

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Absent Wryta 29 January 2009

Nice, true words. Another good poem with a clear message

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