I Wish We Never Met Poem by Desiree Burdick

I Wish We Never Met

Rating: 4.0


tear stained pillows
heart broken feelings
over some one i will never have
its such a shame on how many nights i cried for you
but you did not hear me
id covered my face so you could not see my sadness inside
and painted it over with a smile
but inside it hurts so much
i wish we never met
so my life could go back to normal

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Morin 7231 28 December 2008

sounds like something I'm going thru! very sad poem.

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Marama Kelly 28 December 2008

You have expressed well your pain, agony and heartbreak over one who does not deserve your tears. Love has a tendency to cause heartache and heartbreak when it is not true, and when we seek for something to fill an emptiness deep within, we will always find the wrong one to share it with. Only suggestion I have to enhance this, would be to use punctuation where it is needed, i.e. id should be I'd and of course when referring to self, a capital I seems to read better. Otherwise well done. Many blessings to you

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