Lost Love Poem by Desiree Burdick

Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


our love was leaving both of us
so i took out the key to your heart
i tried to stick it in but it didnt fit
i tried every thing
lotion, butter, and anything elese slippery to get the key in
and yet nothing worked
then it hit me we had seperated and our love was lost
we search for it and found nothing
i guess were not ment to be
but ill always love you and have you in my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Arroyo 13 January 2009

: [ It's so sad. My current status, I would say. I liked how you ended it in a positive manner.

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Thad Wilk 30 December 2008

A lovely an sweet poem Desiree! But save 'that key' it will work for you - when the right guy comes along! ! Best of wishes! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Valerie Hummingbird 29 December 2008

ooo wow that was really nice, keep ur head up, ur going to be ok

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