I Run From Me, You, Love, Hate, And The Chance Of Us Being Together Poem by Desiree Burdick

I Run From Me, You, Love, Hate, And The Chance Of Us Being Together

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i run from me
i run from you
i run from love
i run from hate
i run from the fear of losing you
and yet i run from coming closer to you

can you not see how i feel
do i hide my true emotions for you well
or do you ignore them with a smile
and pretend like theres nothing between us

if i told you that i loved you
would you feel shocked
or do you already know

ill keep running then
for i feel like i cant tell you
how i feel
so ill run from you, me, love, hate
and the chance of us ever being together

Tuesday, March 31, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: hate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 13 April 2009

ah yes the starting sensations of love.. truly amazing uv captured it finely.. bravo

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True description of growing love... nice..

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~ Jon London ~ 09 April 2009

Caught in the middle of those painful pulls of the heart, keep going you're a fine writer

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Dislocated Heart 31 March 2009

hmm.. I found myself doing the same sometimes.... nice write.

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