I Run From Me, You, Love, Hate, And The Chance Of Us Being Together Poem by Desiree Burdick

I Run From Me, You, Love, Hate, And The Chance Of Us Being Together

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i run from me
i run from you
i run from love
i run from hate
i run from the fear of losing you
and yet i run from coming closer to you

can you not see how i feel
do i hide my true emotions for you well
or do you ignore them with a smile
and pretend like theres nothing between us

if i told you that i loved you
would you feel shocked
or do you already know

ill keep running then
for i feel like i cant tell you
how i feel
so ill run from you, me, love, hate
and the chance of us ever being together

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 13 April 2009

ah yes the starting sensations of love.. truly amazing uv captured it finely.. bravo

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True description of growing love... nice..

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~ Jon London ~ 09 April 2009

Caught in the middle of those painful pulls of the heart, keep going you're a fine writer

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Dislocated Heart 31 March 2009

hmm.. I found myself doing the same sometimes.... nice write.

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