Sunday, June 16, 2013

I Won My War Comments

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I've lynched my emotion high and dry
left in the confusion of my last lie
I've lynched my emotion high and dry
swinging softly in the twilight sky
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 March 2020

I fought my battle and I won my war Like being made of metal and surviving the storm I shot down the enemy and I saved the weak I took my wounds and I let them leak.. noble views and ideas. thank you dear poet. tony

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Dave Walker 16 June 2013

A fantastic poem, depression can be a killer. A really great write. Power to you for beating it.

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R.j. Wynn 16 June 2013

Awesome write, well done, check out Stardust and thanks. It ain't easy beating it.

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