Wednesday, April 10, 2019

I Write Andwrite These Small Poems Comments

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I write and write these small poems
But what do they mean?
After all the years
The silence tells me
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Shalom Freedman
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Aniruddha Pathak 10 April 2019

I am not what I hoped to be And tried all my life to be... And the poem ends beautifully. As another old man, I can easily connect to it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2019

The silence tells many things and even small poems motivate mind. We learn many things from failure and try to lead ahead. This poem is excellently penned.10

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Douglas Scotney 10 April 2019

some other 'insignificance', Shalom?

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Shalom Freedman

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