Shalom Freedman

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I Wrote A Good Poem Yesterday - Poem by Shalom Freedman

I WROTE A GOOD POEM YESTERDAY

I wrote a good poem yesterday
It held together
It told its own story
It had a completeness within itself
Its thought was clear
It had feeling
It was good for what I can do
It did not have much many other poems have
Some would say it did not have the essence
No brilliant language
No striking metaphor
I wrote a good poem yesterday
For what I can do
I suspect for many it will seen not much at all
But I did write a good poem yesterday
For what I can do.

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry


Comments about I Wrote A Good Poem Yesterday by Shalom Freedman

  • Simone Inez Harriman (10/30/2015 2:35:00 AM)


    There is nothing like the satisfaction of writing a good poem. Enjoyed reading your poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2015



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