Oh, Ransomed soul.
Oh, heart aglow.
Divine sparks that fly
From the fiery anvil of tests;
memories dimmed by suffering
Float about my mind
in distant squeakish spasms,
Mesmerising my soul
in silent solemn awe
Like a beautiful ice maiden
Frozen in stride.
I like it. Frozen maiden...the poet wants to preserve the Beauty, in a nice, short well penned poem. I give it a 10. Thanks for sharing divine verses our poet, Enoch
Very deep man........a beautiful ice maiden huh, frozen......almost as if your hearts stuck in a position...i really liked.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Mesmerising my soul in silent solemn awe Like a beautiful ice maiden Frozen in stride.' Amazing composition. Love it.