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Valentine Love Song

Rating: 4.0

Cover me with your beauty sublime;
Stain upon my heart the dying echo of love.
Plant in my bosom the eternal seed of hope
And I'll reap a harvest of fulfilment.

Ignite upon the window of my heart
The everlasting fires of hope and liberty.
Permit my ear to hear, the rippling chords
Of the melody of your love song.

A love song sung in dire earnest
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Susan Williams 16 February 2016

Well done- it bears and/or bares a youthful love so intense so wholehearted that it can carry us through many a barren year.

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Paul Amrod 16 February 2016

Hi Enoch, I love this piece however I am an idle musician as well and would like perhaps suggest a small change. Although chords can be broken chords and occasionally construct a melody they usually have the function of supporting the melody that at best soars out of the chordal progression. I would modestly present instead of the word Of (Of the melody of your love song) perhaps guiding giving birth to engendering or creating. I love the simple expressiveness of your style. Thanks for sharing, Paul

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Bernard Snyder 16 February 2016

Awfully impressive poem. Really one of the warmest, sweetest poems I've ever heard! Great stuff!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 February 2016

Soothing and mesmerizing to young and young at hearts, while it can be tantalizing to some. Beautifully crafted. Deserves it's placement. X

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Souren Mondal 16 February 2016

Such a beautiful poem.. You very aptly capture the spirit of love. Thank you for sharing - :)

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Chinedu Dike 10 January 2020

Your diction is a complete delight. Very powerfully and movingly penned. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Rajnish Manga 24 June 2017

Extremely beautiful love poem with a spirit of celebration. Loved reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. I would like to quote: Plant in my bosom the eternal seed of hope And I'll reap a harvest of fulfilment.

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Enoch John 19 February 2016

Thanx guys for all the beautiful comments.

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Enoch John 19 February 2016

Thanx guys for all the wonderful comments.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 February 2016

Fantastically beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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