If I Were! Poem by Neela Nath Das

If I Were!

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If I were in the same
college with Rupert Brooke!
And there is another if....
If I happened to be his girl friend,
wow! I can't imagine,
what could have been the scene.
Handsome and me in King's college,
studying together!
Uh! uh! uh!
Don't break the bubbles
of my reverie!
Let it have more shows!
Beauty and beauty
when meet barely,
what goes on you all
know(as he expressed) .
Hugging, bosoming, rolling,
so on and so forth.
'Shreds of shadowy laughter'
(His phrase) .
And pleasure-passed
two beauties lying
together like peaceful pigeons!
The last scene ending with
the words- - - - - - - - -
This is the beginning....
Or, thus they lived happily.
No war,
no bloodshed,
as if he(Dear poet) hadn't been assigned as
The Royal Naval Volunteer!
There was no first or second world war!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 19 August 2013

beautiful cinclusion of the poem. a beautiful write

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Neela Nath Das 11 August 2013

Thanks for the valuable comments.Actually, when I started writing this poem, I was in light mood.Rupert Brooke is said to be the most handsome poet.In a jolly mood I wrote the first portion.Ultimately, I changed the course and ended it with reference of war.That's it.

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Unwritten Soul 11 August 2013

If i were...someone else i rather to try their own abilities that i never ever get the chance to use it as myself. but back to my nature, i would try to find something in me that other dont have it, just want to make different as who i am when i am living still even in dreaming who i am, if i were...._Soul

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