Never try to mirror,
My image thru your
Words and face!
I know how to kindle,
The light by god's grace!
Demeaning me you,
Can not seize my heaven,
With your hellish
Blue devil mind!
Rather getting into,
Your separate domain,
I'll hug death,
Leaving my life behind!
as if an answer to a question you opened lines, entire poem briefly it meant like you're shielding a weapon! !
i like the ending, the expression of anger and despair is crisp clear.. :)
The ending what a close. Liked blue devil mind but will admit, not sure of it's symbolism. Strong poem.
Eloquent versing, Nil...Has a prosaic smack to it, amd i'm likin' it fine...~FjR~
A powerful emotional outburst…..
Hate can not be won over by hate. While vileness should be riled, the vile need to be won over by love, I believe.
Never try something unknown. To venture is gain.
To kindle the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.
Very powerful emotional write..I'll hug death, Leaving my life behind! bold is always gold..thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Its wonderful..but so much hatred...