Never Try To... Poem by Neela Nath Das

Eloquent versing, Nil...Has a prosaic smack to it, amd i'm likin' it fine...~FjR~

The ending what a close. Liked blue devil mind but will admit, not sure of it's symbolism. Strong poem.

i like the ending, the expression of anger and despair is crisp clear.. :)

as if an answer to a question you opened lines, entire poem briefly it meant like you're shielding a weapon! !

Its wonderful..but so much hatred...

A powerful emotional outburst…..

Hate can not be won over by hate. While vileness should be riled, the vile need to be won over by love, I believe.

Never try something unknown. To venture is gain.

To kindle the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

Very powerful emotional write..I'll hug death, Leaving my life behind! bold is always gold..thank you