Monday, March 31, 2008

If I Were A Mouse! Comments

Rating: 3.7

If I were a mouse I'd live in a house, by the sea with a wood fire burning
I'd warm my tail, read yesterdays mail, and listen to the bread maker churning
I'd put on a hat, watch out for the cat, take a stroll by the side of the sea
the shells I would roll while taking my stroll I think i'll take home with me!
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Bob Gibson
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Irene Clark-hogg 15 January 2009

I love it, I love it. What more can I say. Brilliant! Irene

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 April 2008

I love this poem and I like your style. Your rhythm and rhyme is excellant. I will definitely make you one of my regular visits.Wonderful, just womderful. Gw62

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Bob Gibson

Bob Gibson

Billingham County Durham
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