If My Soul Poem by Patti Masterman

If My Soul

Rating: 5.0


If my soul were the whitest rose,
It could never be white enough;
If my heart were an amber stone,
It couldn't hold in its amber cup

Enough days and ways to tell you
All the things that you mean to me-
But I try to tell you with my kiss,
And the way that my body quakes..

Tuesday, September 13, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 15 September 2011

Fantastic first stanza Second stanza is writtten in a different tone, still very poetic. Overall good poem, Patti.

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Jim Troy 14 September 2011

Such depth covering any doubts a love would ever have about their lady fair.... and the passions just on fire Great love poem. I have saved this one... It is above a 10 Jim Troy

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Eric Cockrell 13 September 2011

strong, and passionate... love this one!

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