If Only Poem by Rashee Shah

If Only

Rating: 2.7


It's so easy to emphasize,
But its even easier to criticise,
My faults are all thats seen by you,
Tears are shed as if they were dew,
A ray of sunshine is all I need,
To help this rainbow become complete,
Surrounded by instability I pray to you,
If only you could change your point of view.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sohil Shah 06 October 2007

'You want to know how I did it? This is how I did it: I never saved anything for the swim back.' - From the film 'Gattaca'

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Aashish Ameya 05 October 2007

nice poem.....like the way u told this...

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Kelly Allen Vinal 28 August 2006

Well put, Rashee - keep them coming!

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Preeti - is here! 28 August 2006

Rashee, you just wrote the exact thing thats on my mind! Very well written~ But, why bother about what others think? -> I'm learning to drill that into me. Preets

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