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If Only - Poem by Er.(Dr.) PRADEEP KUMAR MOHANTY

Once a call from above arose me from within
I gathered courage to explore my past,
I would rather die doing nothing
If only there could be a place to rest and last.

Comments about If Only by Er.(Dr.) PRADEEP KUMAR MOHANTY

  • Swetha Vanakayalapati (8/2/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    exploring past really needs to build up courage and the feel that aroused is to be cherished long that it does wonders with our lives to be more courageous.......really i acknowledge this work which has much to do with divinity and emotions.........we are tender but not weak.....still have the worth to be stronger the strongest with courage.........kudos! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (10/11/2011 11:26:00 AM)

    Beautiful, the way u briefed it! (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2008 3:29:00 PM)

    A very good poem. Great (Report) Reply

  • (4/8/2008 6:58:00 AM)

    I agree with you 100%. If rest were assured after death, even I would have quietly followed Yama - rather than choosing to live this world of karmas. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2008

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