Friday, February 23, 2007
If We Could (Revised 24/2/07) Comments
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If I could tell you what will surely set you free.
If I could help you understand all that you can see.
If I could hold you when you cannot even stand.
If I could love you no matter what you say or do.
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David Taylor
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Kelly Allen Vinal
23 February 2007
Ends in a sense of hopelessness, but your message is deeper. Well done!
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12/17/2025 6:06:11 AM # 1.0.0
David, this is a beautifully written poem and the last three words 'would anyone listen? ' very poignant. It brings into question a lot of the time does anyone listen? All we can do is hope that at least one person does. Great poem. Thanks for sharing it. David