If We Were Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

If We Were

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If we were

I stopped at two sites
-the hero, in both, dogs
-silent and mesmerized
-I watched those animals.

Pet, in first, was to meet
-someone that was its love
-dog stood with hands light
-most its weight on the hinds;
-opened door and dog jumped.

Went through doorframe
-like glide…
-in mountains, para-jump…

What a scene from dog
- (a thankful, loyal one)
-to friends of old times.

The dog of latter scene
-was inside, in waiting
-to come out or barking;
-it needed "Do" (permit)

"Be good and keep sitting, "
-were the words floating…
-and the dog got meaning.

Was brown with big eyes
-and short legs, long ears.

I stood and observed
-every cell was thinking:
- "Wish I was animal
-anyone, any kind! "

Am ashamed of mankind;
-miserable, full of lies,
-least smart, very dumb,
-greedy, cruel and brutal.

Saturday, March 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: animals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2019

Watching the animals and noticing their activities is a greater aspect. You have amazingly penned this excellent poem.10

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