If You Don'T Come! Poem by Parwin Jadan

If You Don'T Come!

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if you don't come my life will stop
and i will die very slowly
i will melt like a candle
oh my love
i will wait and stay up late
never sleep
waiting for you
under a waterfall of chilly rain
under a black sky
and thunders will talk to me
me all alone
cold and dead...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 02 January 2009

Parwin, I am impressed, you write with great maturity but express your emotions like a young man let free... Regards, Ivan

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 31 December 2008

Beautiful poem.....flows like a song.

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