Destiny Poem by Parwin Jadan

Destiny

Rating: 2.8


Summer is short
Winter is long
Autumn is close
Spring is a dream
And the swing is walking
She was like moon
On the water face
You were a grey shadow
And I dropped inside
That dark deeps

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 22 January 2009

This is indeed, very symbolic. I liked it though. Normally I don't like it. But this was simple and direct. No guile was involved. GW62

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 01 January 2009

A beautiful poem indeed....Symbolic but meaningful....Good work...Keep on writing.....10.

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