'If You Meant' Poem by Linda Winchell

'If You Meant'



If you meant to add to this pain I'm feeling,
Then your arrows hit their mark!

If you were aiming not to hit me,
You've missed and struck me in my heart!

If your words were meant to comfort,
You had them scrambled up somehow.

For the pain of everyone of them,
Is still felt deep in me somehow.

One day you too may feel this pain,
And I pray that you do not,
Where someone comes with not comfort bring,
And their meaness makes their mark.

Would it have been so hard for you to say,
'I am sorry for your loss? '
For the kindness another brings,
Is so precious and has not cost.

Maybe next time you'll remember,
Of the damage that you did,
And be kinder then you were to me,
Not the sadness that you did give.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tarun Sharma 05 September 2008

you speak straight and true! rare & good rgds

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Raynette Eitel 24 August 2008

Linda, you started this nicely with couplets. I would suggest that you continue the couplets. Your first four-line stanza needs reworking...one line makes no sense at all. Otherwise, I think your poem does what you want it to do. We've all been there at one time or another. Raynette

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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