'If You Could See The Real Me' Poem by Linda Winchell

'If You Could See The Real Me'

Rating: 5.0


I was gonna email you this letter
But I know you have been losing your sight.
So I'll just dropp over your place
And read it instead to you, if that is alright?

If I've made some spelling errors
you won't ever know.
I'll just keep up the pace of my reading
I'll not stutter or slow!

Now with your failing eye sight
I must look to you, kinda good.
You can't really ever envision
What I look like under my coat and hood.

So if you need to know
Just how I look one day.
I will be sure to let you know
That I look fantastic and have lost ten pounds
I woulnd't have it any other way!

You say that I look as if
I have a hallow around my head.
And my hair looks to you
a bright color of, 'Red.'

So I'll just let you continue
Going on to see what you do.
Because my dearest of friend
It is better much better for me that I do.

My hair has been colored
To cover all my hairs of Gray.
I just had it done
By my hairdresser today.

Cost a fortune, ya know?
But I think I'm worth it, I do!
And I hope that the Doctor doesn't give you 20/20
Or you may have a different point of the view.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 18 February 2009

This is beautifully expressed Linda..as if, i was the one you're telling to..But i do enjoyed reading this, because this is a very pleasure to read..Thanks for this nice treat..You lifted up my soul today. Love you, Meggie

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Catrina Heart 18 February 2009

The heart has its own eyes to see the real beauty of a person, physical attributes doesn't matter to those who has true love in their hearts.... though, they say physical appearance is a plus factor. Nice expressive and vivid composition...10+++

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Linda Winchell

Linda Winchell

Chicago Illinois
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