I have a love I would die for
and they say their love is real.
Would they step in front of an arrow shot?
for this love they proclaim for me to feel.
I wouldn't want to test fates waters
of this depth of love they've now shown.
But if the chips were down
would their love for me last and grow?
Romeo had Juliet, lover's poison passed their lips
I see couples that seem as close as this
they seemed joined together at the hip.
Life and love will be what it is to be
it will grow or it might fall apart.
It is all really, what one has stored deep inside,
stored deep within their heart.
love is for real and for the lucky few it comes as a blessing... a really magical piece of litearture... :)
Ah! My kind of poet! Good to see we rhymers still survive. Love the poem and the sentiment, but may I just make one negative (and I hope, constructive) comment? You start with 'I have 'A' love' and continue with 'them' and 'they' - should be 'he' (or she, who knows?) .
this is a masterpiece of love.. amazing job u amazing
nice poem. well written. I enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing. Please feel free to read some of my work.
Life and love will be what it is to be it will grow or it might fall apart. It is all really, what one has stored deep inside, stored deep within their heart. when you can store all your love deep in your heart, how happy you would be.. nice poem on love, enjoyed reading it. thank you tony
In depth poem indeed love is shown at the end of the poem which brings to mind the many Americans that have died for their country...+++++10...regards
Great and nice emotions put forth. God bless those who love poetry-MJG.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Linda this echoes with devotion to the true kind of love. Well versed too. A ten from me, best wishes from Fay.