Friday, June 17, 2005

If You Slit My Throat Some Night Comments

Rating: 4.9

You despise a lady friend of mine,
You grow animal-like and wild in your eyes
If I speak her name;
If I suggest I might see her some day
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Uriah Hamilton
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Shannon Chapel 29 December 2005

Bravo! I'm with the others - the ending is perfect! S

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Amberlee Carter 22 November 2005

brilliant ending dear Uriah...wish i would of thought of it.

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i'm with Tiffany here. the ending is awesome. good work! Jake

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Bkhj Chen 17 June 2005

nice!

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***** ***** 17 June 2005

Wow! I love this... the idea of the praying mantis mating relationship has always had appeal for the woman...: -)

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