If You Were A Rose... Poem by Freeyad Ibrahim

If You Were A Rose...

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by Freeyad Ibrahim

If you were a candle
My heart would be a butterfly
Roaming round you
Like a pilgrim
Around the Kaaba!

If you were a rose
My heart is then a bulbul
Sings to you
Until he or you die
He would stay...
never would fly.

If you were a flower
Then my heart would become a bee
Gives honey
As long as you
Will be

So looks the life like
In my eyes
Without you:
Somber
Silent
Songless
Tasteless!

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Freyad Hugo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 25 May 2022

excellent poem with similes dear Ibrahim.

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Freeyad Ibrahim 25 May 2022

yes dear Mr-Mrs Dash...lots of similies to be seen in my poem---thanks

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Freeyad Ibrahim 25 May 2022

very much pleased and proud you left me feel dear Nabakishore Dash---I wish you all the best--good evening

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