I Love You With No Condition
Rating: ★4.8
Honey…To Love You Is My Ambition
I Love You With No Condition
by Freeyad Ibrahim
I've got just one ambition
To Love you without condition
I think before taking decision
But your love is beyond decision
your face is a pure perfection
No need then for any addition
Come up to my garden of love
Without asking for permission
I love you with no condition
Be merciful I feel alone
I wait for a faint breeze passage
To give it an oral message
It is not sin to love darling
All prophets loved before
they received divine message
Nothing is sacred as passion
Loving is alike Loving the god
Makes you fine..makes you divine
Until the Day of Resurrection
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Freyad Hugo
January,2020
I Love You With No Condition
by Freeyad Ibrahim
I've got just one ambition
To Love you without condition
I think before taking decision
But your love is beyond decision
your face is a pure perfection
No need then for any addition
Come up to my garden of love
Without asking for permission
I love you with no condition
Be merciful I feel alone
I wait for a faint breeze passage
To give it an oral message
It is not sin to love darling
All prophets loved before
they received divine message
Nothing is sacred as passion
Loving is alike Loving the god
Makes you fine..makes you divine
Until the Day of Resurrection
*
Freyad Hugo
January,2020
Friday, November 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
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COMMENTS
Sylvia Frances Chan
05 December 2020
CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day in such shortest time. Mesmerizing read and this poem is most deserving to receive that greatest honour on Poem Hunter poem site. Happiest is the person in this winning poem. Finest perfect end rhymings. I have enjoyed very very much.5 Stars and to MyPoemList! Greatest Bliss is this poem, a gem that keeps echoing in my heart. Thank YOU! GOD blesses you greatest, dear poet Freeyad! Brilliant poem!
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Freeyad
09 December 2020
Beste Sylvia
You are mesmerized by my poem but I am paralyzed with your congratulating words
God bless you Sylvia...If I'd ever become a GOOD well reputed poet, it is because your soul was present by my side every time I put a letter on my page
Sincerely Yours
Freyad
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Freeyad
24 December 2020
Beste Sylvia You are mesmerized by my poem but I am paralyzed with your congratulating words God bless you Sylvia...If I'd ever become a GOOD well reputed poet, it is because your soul was present by my side every time I put a letter on my page Sincerely Yours Freyad
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Mahtab Bangalee
05 December 2020
All prophets loved before
they received divine message
Nothing is sacred as passion
Loving is alike Loving the god
Makes you fine..makes you divine
Until the Day of Resurrection/// beautiful, really really a beautiful loving, holy loving poem shared with excellent first some rhyming; delightful feelings to read this poem; Love- a sacred feelings from the core of every lover where both souls merge into one within holy note of spirituality; congrats for being selected this poem as POD …5*****
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Freeyad Ibrahim Hugo
10 December 2020
My dear Mahtab...you pleased me very much with your gentle words
very much appreciated...
sincerely
Freyad
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Soul mate
05 December 2020
Passion is not just thinking and dreaming you have to act and let you lover know the liver may not know
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Freeyad
09 December 2020
Dear Soul, I am very pleased with your nice words
kind regards
Freyad
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Freeyad
10 December 2020
my dear Soul...I am very much pleased and proud with your gentle words
heartly thanks
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Freyad
24 December 2020
Dear Soul, I am very pleased with your nice words kind regards Freyad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet
05 December 2020
IN THIS STYLE OF POETRY YOU NEED NE CONDITION ONLY ALL WORDS MUST END WITH RENDITION PERMISSION SUBMISSION PARTICIPATION ONLY DON'T CHANGE TO GARBAGE SAVAGE ETC AND SHOW THESAURUS LIMITATION MAINLY FOLLOW ME READ
MOMS SMILES
OK POET WITH
NO CONDITION
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Edward Kofi Louis
05 December 2020
Passion of life! ! ! !
True love is without condition!
Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Kim Barney
05 December 2020
Congratulations, Freeyad,
for having this selected as Member Poem of the Day!
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Khairul Ahsan
05 December 2020
Love cannot and shouldn't be conditional.
Heartiest congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
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Freeyad
24 December 2020
You honored me so much with your congratulation comment...may God bless you
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Khairul Ahsan
05 December 2020
'It is not sin to love darling' - of course not. Loving cannot be sinning, unless you love somebody else's spouse.
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Freeyad
14 December 2020
Your comment I like very much for its clever reasoning thanks for the attention
best wishes
Freyad
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Luis Estable
05 December 2020
The loving without condition is much spoiled here by the introduction, in the poem, of her face being pure perfection. If so, the condition is already stated. By the way, there is no such thing as loving without condition. If that could be possible, we`d marry just about any body: black, brown, thief, drug addict, fat, short. But no. We always look for that person we like.
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Luis Estable
05 December 2020
The loving without condition is much spoiled here by the introduction, in the poem, that her face is pure perfection. Them if so, he does not love or can love without condition. The condition for love is already stated in poem, " her facer being pure perfection.
By the way, there is no such thing as a love without condition. If that could be the case one would marry any body; black, white, brown, drug addict, thief, tall, short, fat, thin etc. But no we always look for that one we
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