Im Lying So You Won'T Hurt Poem by Selena Star

Im Lying So You Won'T Hurt



I said im okay
When really I am not
I cry every day and night
Cos heartache put me on the spot
I became sick
And said 'its only a cold'
But its really because i miss you
Forever and ever, even when im old
All this congestion
Comming up my throat
Is not the allergies
But its the love you had for me
Its spilling out of my system
Because your love isn't there with mine
Its a loner you see
With nothing to be there with it
Love needs two people,
Two hearts, and maybe even two lips
But you left me, along with your heart,
you also took your lips,
and called us 'apart'
I lie and lie and say 'im okay...
I got over you, and thats how it will stay...
I won't cry for you,
I won't miss your sweet smile,
And most of all I wont miss
The way you kissed me after the Fiesta,
I won't miss that day,
And what happened on my birthday,
I won't miss how i fell on you at the skating ring
Or even the hugs you gave me
When i had to leave, 'goodbye'
So when you see me in the halls,
At a game, on the street...
Don't feel guilty
Dont regret when our hearts first met
And most of all
Dont Regret
All the love we shared'
I still LIE and say 'im okay
Its only a cold'
But baby, just know, that i will miss you,
Even when i grow old

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lucianne Fasolo 14 September 2007

You have to fix the grammar. There are some verses that need to be more worked on, too. Still, I liked your poem. The way you started and ended it talking about how you say your grief is a cold was nice. Don't worry, though: you'll soon get over the heartache. That's what everybody does, it's natural, ;)

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